The Turnout
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Read between March 22 - March 25, 2022
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Dara felt badly, except she didn’t.
Aoife Cassidy McM
Right up there with the worst sentences ever written.
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Long summer nights, the click of the beetles, the soft grind of the cicadas, all those crickets rubbing their legs together, the low moan of the mosquitoes at the screen.
Aoife Cassidy McM
She even sexualises the insects.
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They could take these things inside them and emerge unscathed. Dangerous things, deadly things. They could take these things inside and remain untouched, immaculate. The same forever. Forever the same.
Aoife Cassidy McM
Why use ten words when you can use thirty?
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Like sharing a room all those years, knowing even the smell of her tampons, stuffed in the trash.
Aoife Cassidy McM
Gross. So many passages like this (and worse) in the book.
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Dara led the way, vining them through the swarm, the air muzzy with that familiar studio mix of sweat, funk, hairspray, camphor oil, urine, vomit, this grand and stately theater completely contaminated by the Durant School of Dance in just six hours.
Aoife Cassidy McM
Sweatingly sweaty sweat.
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One day, she discovered him working long after she thought he’d left for the day. He was kneeling beside the tub, fondling its new gold taps with such delicacy.
Aoife Cassidy McM
Fondling the taps 😂.
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